Thank you for visiting SNEWPapers!
Sign up free
Letter to Editor
October 2, 1787
The New York Packet
New York, New York County, New York
What is this article about?
In 1784, an elderly writer critiques the mottos of the Society of the Cincinnati, arguing they fail to capture Cincinnatus's patriotic sacrifice and virtue, and proposes more poetic Latin alternatives.
OCR Quality
95%
Excellent
Full Text
On Inscriptions of the Cincinnati, 1784.
An old man in the shade of obscurity, presents, with the utmost diffidence, the following remarks. They are not, he knows, of much consequence, but as they are well meant, he hopes they will be received with candor by those whom they concern; and for whose benevolence, and liberality of sentiment, he entertains the highest respect.
To design, and to adapt mottos or inscriptions, require different qualifications; and these qualifications are more seldom the possession of any individual, than is generally imagined. Whether the subject of these remarks supports my position, I shall not attempt to determine. But the inscriptions of the Cincinnati appear to have been most unhappily elected. Adapted they are by no means to the design.
An inscription of this sort, should be 'brevis et locuples;' short but rich—comprehensive and emphatic. To which I would not hesitate to add something of the poetic boldness. When the subject is grand, every thing respecting it should be great.
Cincinnatus is one of the most respectable characters. His situation is delicate in the extreme, and interesting. His domestic sensibility, exquisite: and the love of his country made more ardent, by her calling on him for aid. Upon this review of things, how tame and flat is the expression?
'Omnia reliquit servare rempublicam.'
Instead of which, suppose something like one of these. 'Vincit amor patriae. Patria vincit, or vicit vincit is the best. Patriam prætulit omnibus. Patria pro omnibus illi.'
'Virtutis præmium' has the first essential; but not the last.
Besides, there is nothing great in premium applied to virtue. I think, indeed, the reverse; and condemn the expression, as improper. I know there is one authority, which some imagine justifies the application; but I think that very authority, supports my opinion. Omnipotente alone can reward virtue.
I would prefer a declaration, that this was the fruit, consequence, or effect of virtue. Such as these—'Virtutis honos. Virtute debitum, or datum.'
'Evo perpetua' is short, but extremely rapid.
Are not the following better? 'In aeternum vivat. Semper floreat. Tempori superstes.'
On 'Societas Cincinnatorum instituta' I shall but just observe that it sounds extremely rough and grating to my ear; and that I wish they had taken the name of Washington. For not adopting that name, I suppose they had their reason; though I cannot conceive any good ones.
SEXAGENARIUS.
An old man in the shade of obscurity, presents, with the utmost diffidence, the following remarks. They are not, he knows, of much consequence, but as they are well meant, he hopes they will be received with candor by those whom they concern; and for whose benevolence, and liberality of sentiment, he entertains the highest respect.
To design, and to adapt mottos or inscriptions, require different qualifications; and these qualifications are more seldom the possession of any individual, than is generally imagined. Whether the subject of these remarks supports my position, I shall not attempt to determine. But the inscriptions of the Cincinnati appear to have been most unhappily elected. Adapted they are by no means to the design.
An inscription of this sort, should be 'brevis et locuples;' short but rich—comprehensive and emphatic. To which I would not hesitate to add something of the poetic boldness. When the subject is grand, every thing respecting it should be great.
Cincinnatus is one of the most respectable characters. His situation is delicate in the extreme, and interesting. His domestic sensibility, exquisite: and the love of his country made more ardent, by her calling on him for aid. Upon this review of things, how tame and flat is the expression?
'Omnia reliquit servare rempublicam.'
Instead of which, suppose something like one of these. 'Vincit amor patriae. Patria vincit, or vicit vincit is the best. Patriam prætulit omnibus. Patria pro omnibus illi.'
'Virtutis præmium' has the first essential; but not the last.
Besides, there is nothing great in premium applied to virtue. I think, indeed, the reverse; and condemn the expression, as improper. I know there is one authority, which some imagine justifies the application; but I think that very authority, supports my opinion. Omnipotente alone can reward virtue.
I would prefer a declaration, that this was the fruit, consequence, or effect of virtue. Such as these—'Virtutis honos. Virtute debitum, or datum.'
'Evo perpetua' is short, but extremely rapid.
Are not the following better? 'In aeternum vivat. Semper floreat. Tempori superstes.'
On 'Societas Cincinnatorum instituta' I shall but just observe that it sounds extremely rough and grating to my ear; and that I wish they had taken the name of Washington. For not adopting that name, I suppose they had their reason; though I cannot conceive any good ones.
SEXAGENARIUS.
What sub-type of article is it?
Persuasive
Philosophical
Reflective
What themes does it cover?
Military War
Morality
Social Issues
What keywords are associated?
Cincinnati Inscriptions
Latin Mottos
Cincinnatus Virtue
Society Critique
Patriotism Emphasis
What entities or persons were involved?
Sexagenarius.
Letter to Editor Details
Author
Sexagenarius.
Main Argument
the inscriptions of the society of the cincinnati are poorly chosen and not adapted to their grand subject; better alternatives should emphasize cincinnatus's patriotism and virtue more emphatically and poetically.
Notable Details
Critiques 'Omnia Reliquit Servare Rempublicam' As Tame
Suggests Alternatives Like 'Vincit Amor Patriae' And 'Patriæ Prætulit Omnibus'
Opposes 'Virtutis Præmium' As Improper For Virtue
Proposes 'Virtutis Honos' Or 'Virtute Debitum'
Suggests 'In Aeternum Vivat' Over 'Evo Perpetua'
Wishes The Society Had Taken The Name Of Washington